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If you want to impress an agent, director, producer, or contest reader, your screenplay must be exceptional.

  • Is your opening scene memorable?
  • Is your story visually striking?
  • Are your characters engaging?
  • Is there a powerful HOOK?
  • Is your narrative polished?
  • Is your structure solid?
  • Does your theme resonate?

Your script needs to accomplish all this and more in order to succeed.

My in-depth feedback and analysis will address these crucial elements and give you the tools needed to optimize your screenplay’s potential. 

You will receive 5-8 pages of notes for shorts and 8-20 pages for features, with constructive criticism and actionable advice based on your specific script needs.

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