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SCRIPT BUTCHER IS A CUT ABOVE

If you want to impress an agent, director, producer, or contest reader, your screenplay must be exceptional.

  • Is your opening scene memorable?
  • Is your story visually striking?
  • Are your characters engaging?
  • Is there a powerful HOOK?
  • Is your narrative polished?
  • Is your structure solid?
  • Does your theme resonate?

Your script needs to accomplish all this and more in order to succeed.

My in-depth feedback and analysis will address these crucial elements and give you the tools needed to optimize your screenplay’s potential. 

You will receive 5-8 pages of notes for shorts and 8-20 pages for features, with constructive criticism and actionable advice based on your specific script needs.

“Your comments were uniformly helpful and constructive. Greatly exceeded expectations. Really helpful notes. Will definitely be using again. Thanks!”

Jordan Fox

“Once again, I’m floored by your brilliance!!! Most definitely bringing another draft and another new script soon.”

N. Mabasa-Mathope