Each of these service options will include my in-depth analysis, notes, and advice on how to improve and optimize the story you’ve created. You will also receive a scanned copy of your script with extensive margin notes and suggested edits written directly on the page.

I’m typically booked months in advance.

If you’d like to order a set of script notes, please contact me at scriptbutcher@gmail.com .

 TV-PILOT SERVICE – $350

8-20 pages of overall analysis and actionable advice covering your presentation, characters, dialogue, structure, and theme. 

PLUS a scanned copy of your script with extensive margin notes, proofreading, and suggested line edits written directly on every single page.

 FEATURE LENGTH SCRIPT SERVICE – $500

8-30 pages of overall analysis and actionable advice covering your presentation, characters, dialogue, structure, and theme.

PLUS a scanned copy of your script with extensive margin notes, proofreading, and suggested line edits written directly on every single page.

If your script is longer than 120 pages, I charge $5 per each additional page.

HOW YOUR SCRIPT BUTCHER SERVICE WORKS 

Once you choose a service option please send your logline, synopsis, and a PDF of your TV PILOT or FEATURE LENGTH SCRIPT to scriptbutcher@gmail.com.

I accept PDFs only.

I encourage you to include a document with any questions, comments, or concerns about your script that you’d like me to address in my notes.

This will help me give you the best service possible.

WHAT YOU’LL GET WHEN YOU ORDER 

I want to be clear about what you’ll be receiving with your order to ensure you have a satisfying experience.

This order does not include a re-written logline or synopsis.

I also will not create any original material for your script.

What this service will include is expert analysis, notes, constructive criticism and actionable advice on how to improve and optimize the story you’ve created. 

My feedback will range from 8-15 pages for TV Pilots and 8-25 pages for Features with helpful advice based on your script’s specific needs.

My notes are exhaustive, going far beyond the typical 2-3 page generic studio coverage.

As mentioned earlier, with each order you will also receive a scanned copy of your script with extensive margin notes and suggested edits written directly on the page.

Click here for a 9 page sample from a 20 page script analysis. 

If you have any questions, please contact me at scriptbutcher@gmail.com