SCRIPT BUTCHER SERVICE OPTIONS 

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A sample of my on-the-page edits. Every page will be covered top to bottom with notes.

Each of these service options will include my in-depth analysis, notes, and advice on how to improve and optimize the story you’ve created. You will also receive a scanned copy of your script with extensive margin notes and suggested edits written directly on the page.

There are currently 18 ORDERS in the queue.

My next opening for delivery of script notes is Tuesday September 11th.

ScriptButcherProfilePic FIRST 10 PAGES SERVICE – $40 

Looking for notes on the first ten pages of your PILOT or FEATURE SCRIPT?

You will receive a scanned copy of your script with extensive margin notes and suggested edits written directly on your first ten pages.

NOTE: Margin notes only. No additional analysis will be included. 

First 10 Pages Service

$40.00

ScriptButcherProfilePic TREATMENT SERVICE – $75

Do you have a 5-10 page treatment for your screenplay or teleplay? I will provide 2-5 pages of notes and actionable advice on how to improve your material.

Treatment Service

$75.00

ScriptButcherProfilePic 1-20 PAGE SHORT FILM SCRIPT SERVICE – $75 

This service is for short film scripts 20 pages in length or less.

You will receive 5-8 pages of notes and advice covering everything from your narrative, characters, dialogue, structure, to theme. Plus a scanned copy of your script with extensive margin notes and suggested edits written directly on the page. 

NOTE: If your script is longer than 20 pages but shorter than feature length, contact me and I will send you a custom invoice based on the length of your short. 

Short Film Script Service

$75.00

ScriptButcherProfilePic TV-PILOT SERVICE – $175

8-15 pages of notes and advice covering everything from your narrative, characters, dialogue, structure, to theme. Plus a scanned copy of your script with extensive margin notes and suggested edits written directly on the page. 

TV Pilot Service

$175.00

ScriptButcherProfilePic FEATURE LENGTH SCRIPT SERVICE – $250

8-20 pages of notes and advice covering everything from your narrative, characters, dialogue, structure, to theme. Plus a scanned copy of your script with extensive margin notes and suggested edits written directly on the page. 

Feature Length Script Service

$250.00

ScriptButcherProfilePic SECOND DRAFT SERVICE – 25% OFF 

Whether it’s a short, tv-pilot, or feature length script, if I’ve consulted on your script in the past, I will give you my full service on your re-written draft for 25% off the original price. Contact me and I’ll send you a custom invoice.

HOW YOUR SCRIPT BUTCHER SERVICE WORKS 

Once you choose a service option please send your logline, synopsis, and a PDF of your SHORT FILM SCRIPT, TV PILOT, or FEATURE LENGTH SCRIPT to scriptbutcher@gmail.com.

I accept PDFs only.

I encourage you to include a document with any questions, comments, or concerns about your script that you’d like me to address in my notes.

This will help me give you the best service possible.

WHAT YOU’LL GET WHEN YOU ORDER 

I want to be clear about what you’ll be receiving with your order to ensure you have a satisfying experience.

This order does not include a re-written logline or synopsis. I also will not create any original material for your script.

What this service will include is expert analysis, notes, constructive criticism and actionable advice on how to improve and optimize the story you’ve created. 

My feedback will range from 5-8 pages for shorts and 8-20 pages for features with helpful advice based on your specific script needs.

My notes are exhaustive, going far beyond the typical 2-3 page generic studio coverage.

As mentioned earlier, with each order you will also receive a scanned copy of your script with extensive notes and suggested edits written directly on the page.

Click here for a 9 page sample from a 20 page script analysis. 

If you have any questions, please contact me at scriptbutcher@gmail.com