LOOKING FOR FRESH QUALITY SCRIPT NOTES? 

SCRIPT BUTCHER IS A CUT ABOVE

If you want to impress an agent, director, producer, or contest reader, your screenplay must be exceptional.

• Is your story visually striking?
• Are your characters engaging?
• Is there a powerful HOOK?
• Is your presentation polished?
• Is your structure solid?
• Does your story deliver on the promise of your premise? 
• Is your dialogue memorable and premise specific?
• Does your theme resonate?

Your script needs to accomplish all this and much more in order to succeed.

My in-depth feedback and analysis will address these crucial elements and give you the tools needed to optimize your screenplay’s potential. 

You will receive 8-15 pages of notes for TV Pilots and 8-25 pages for Features, with actionable advice based on your specific script needs.